- Naturvetenskapsprogrammet (NA) Årskurs 1
- Engelska 5
The Murderer In Room 101 | Elevnovell
En elevnovell på engelska som är thrillerinspirerad.
Quick feedback on your short story:
You have a descriptive short story, you make rather good use of adjectives and adverbs which makes for a colorful story that is easy to picture, building up tension nicely. Language has a nice flow when it comes to grammar and register. Good! Make alterations in brackets (parantes) after the yellow markings so I can follow your process. Good job!
I was on a business trip in Ravenesse and stayed at a five star hotel. The hallways were well lit by gilded chandeliers and the walls were beige with a traditional black pattern. In every room, there was a small door number plate. I had number 101 and went into my room. It was a small room with a bed and two small bedside tables, one at each side of the bed. In the middle of the room there was a large red carpet. The floor consisted of wooden boards and was very clean, almost as if someone had wiped the floor a few hours before I had arrived. There was also this wonderful scent. It smelled as if I was at(on) a field filled with flowers, and the flowers had an aroma of vanilla. It was such a nice scent and I'd say it felt like the kisses of nature, so pure and fresh, and definitely something I could get used to.
Someone knocked on the door and I opened. There stood a woman of my age, with long brown hair and dark brown eyes. “Hello there neighbour. Since you just moved in I'd really like to get to know you better.” she said and went on “Would you like to grab some drinks at the hotel bar? I hear they sell(have) the best drinks in town.. By the way, my name is Kayla” S(s)he smiled. It was the warmest smile I had ever seen and of course I accepted her invitation.
That evening, Kayla and I went to the hotel bar and I ordered two martinis, one for me and one for her. The bartender asked me what my name was and which room I was staying at (in)because the... Köp tillgång för att läsa mer